Sun Dance
When the sun goes down, at twilight,
The horizon sets ablaze a colourful show,
And elsewhere will be a beautiful sunrise,
As we wait for the night sky to say hello;
The magic takes place every day, everywhere,
As we wait for the night sky to say hello;
The magic takes place every day, everywhere,
And it's never the same any day, anywhere;
I sit in silence watching the sun dance,
The sight of it sending chills up my spine;
Half conscious in a slight state of trance,
In the colorful sky, I see your graceful smile;
The dusk falls into a beautiful starry night,
Leaving me gazing, till you to come alight.
I sit in silence watching the sun dance,
The sight of it sending chills up my spine;
Half conscious in a slight state of trance,
In the colorful sky, I see your graceful smile;
The dusk falls into a beautiful starry night,
Leaving me gazing, till you to come alight.
Athif Ahmed
"Sun Dance" by Athif Ahmed is a beautiful poem. It takes the words right out my mouth explaining how beautiful the sunset really is. We can be witnessing the sunset but someone else out there might be watching the sunrise. It's amazing how life works and to be able to the see the sunset is just one of the most amazing events the world has to offer. Seeing the sky transition from blue to the bright colors on a pallet is an occurrence that is breathtaking and should be witnessed everyday.
Work Cited
Ahmed, Athif. "Sun Dance." All Poetry. N.p. n.d. Web. 25 Oct. 2014.
I like your discussion of change. What amazes me is how quickly my garden has changed, yet it has happened slowly (I don't know it that makes sense). In a month, my yard went from full bloom to dying and falling and decaying--but it happened without one specific change.
ReplyDeleteWow, I really like how you described everything. It gives it this nice tone, and drew me in. I can't wait to hear more! I really loved the last paragraph, it makes me want to see the sunset and sunrise more often. you're doing a great job.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you included the poem, it shows that you are taking this very seriously. Also, I liked how you included the transition of time.
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